Kab tak in Aansuwon ko tum Bahaogey

05 Apr

Ek din humne apni behte hue aansuon se puncha
Kyun behte ho tum, kyun rukte nahi ho tum
Wo hasna Chahte the lekin achanak ruk se gaye
Shayad Gum ka bojh un par phir se bhari padh gaya
Wo dabi hui aawaaz mein mujhe bolein
Dil mein tumhare bahut gum hai
Un gamoen ke samne hum toh bahut hi kam hain

Tum Duniya se apne dard chupate ho
Samay Samay par hamein tum pi Jatein ho
Mann Tumhara hamesha Rota hain
Aur tum phir humse puchte ho aisa kyun hota hain

Hum toh kabhi kabhi tham jate hain..
Tumhe hum ehsaas dialate hain ki hum bhi thak gaye hain
Magar tumhara dil bas rota hi rehta hai
Jane kitne janmo ka dard liye rehta hain

Hum toh Aansu hain, hamara kaam hai behna
Gum ko apne Ukhad pheko maan lo hamara ye kehna
Dukh to bahut hoga aur Dukh saath apne dard layega
Magar ab na ruko tum, kyonki ab inhe nikal na paye toh
Iss daldal se tumhe koi nikaal nahi payega….


Posted by on April 5, 2012 in Hindi Poetry


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2 responses to “Kab tak in Aansuwon ko tum Bahaogey

  1. rakesh

    April 13, 2012 at 6:36 am

    nice poem !!
    the flow of poem is very important !!
    a little imporvement should be there !!
    i know you are a great writer

    • thepeerless

      April 13, 2012 at 6:43 am

      Ohh thanks a lot. Receiving a reply from one of my best friends always means a lot to me. I am trying to improve and also focus on my sentence structure so that the flow seems good and it’s your generosity to term me as a great writer, hope I can live up to your expectations. Cheers.


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