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Jhuthe Pyaar Se Accha Sachi Nafrat hi kar li hoti Tumne

28 Dec

Is tutey dil ko kaise jodein hum

Jab nafrat hi karni thi toh pyaar kyun kiya

Jab zulm hi dhane the toh aitbaar kyun kiya

Keh diya hota Usi samay humase

Ke nahi hai mohabbat Hamein tumse……….

….

Jab dil hi nahi tha dene ke liye

Toh tumhe fursat mili kaise pyaar ke liye

Jhuthe pyaar se accha Sachi Nafrat hi kar li hoti tumne

Dil mein tumhare kitni Nafrat hai dikha di hoti tumne

……..

Bus itna Keh diya hota tumne mujhe……

Pyaar koi khel nahi aur hum dono ka koi mail nahi

Hum apne dil ko pathar bana lete

Kisi tarah usey behla fusla kar mana lete……..

…..
Chot jab ab abhi lagi hai toh Zakhm bhi rehengey

Dard hua hai toh aansu bhi bahengey

Aur jaise-2 yeh Khoon ke aanshu beh rehein hai

waise-2 mere dil ke armaan simat rahein hai……

….

Magar ye mat sochna ki hum bhi tumse nafrat karengey

kyonki Jabtak jiyengey tumse bas pyaar hi karengey

Khoon ke aansu toh bahana aa gaya hai hamein

Ab bas tumhare bina kaise jeena hai yeh Seekhna hai hamein………………

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7 Comments

Posted by on December 28, 2011 in Fiction Stories, Hindi Poetry

 

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7 responses to “Jhuthe Pyaar Se Accha Sachi Nafrat hi kar li hoti Tumne

  1. seema kumari ladsaria

    December 29, 2011 at 5:55 am

    pyaar manzil nahi, ek raah hai,
    meera ne dard se pyar kiya
    radha ne pyaar se pyaar kiya,
    par jo dard ko mila
    wo pyaar na pa saka
    great congrats, for creating this master peice

     
  2. thepeerless

    December 29, 2011 at 6:04 am

    Thanks a lot Seema. You eloquently pointed out the point of win of hatred over love. I am still learning and I still don’t know how I write hindi poetries because after few days once I have written a poem, if I read it back, I am left startled… Seems stupid but that’s the way it is with me. Thanks. God bless.

     
  3. Anusha Pathak

    January 16, 2012 at 8:32 am

    Awesome… i luved dis part

    “Bus itna Keh diya hota tumne mujhe……

    Pyaar koi khel nahi aur hum dono ka koi mail nahi

    Hum apne dil ko pathar bana lete

    Kisi tarah usey behla fusla kar mana lete……..”

    well..i must say u have the potential…nd honestly u r good.. 🙂

     
    • thepeerless

      January 16, 2012 at 8:42 am

      Thanks a lot. Such comments are moral boosters for amateur writers like me. Hope you read the other one ” Phir Se Udegi Patang Hamari”. This way my first poem.

       
  4. Diksha mukhija

    March 3, 2012 at 2:31 am

    Abhishek bhaiyya,
    mere pas to kuch kehne ko bacha hi nahi…
    Wo sab baate keh di aapne jo reh gayi thhi ankahin….
    Ye panktiyaan padhi, to sanse tham gayi….
    Aapke samne hamare shabdo mein jaan nahi rahin….:)

     
  5. thepeerless

    March 3, 2012 at 3:10 am

    Thanks a ton Diksha. I’ll try to better myself in the future.

     
  6. Vijay Soren

    May 4, 2014 at 11:36 am

    Nice blog!

     

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